Reviews for My dream
jahefsdfds chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Beautifully concise and true. I agree with every word here, and strive for the same things you do. So few people realize how incredible what we've got here truly is, and take for granted the infinite number of oppurtunities we've been given. Live with love, girl.

Just ONE small glip, and sort of important: you spelled the word 'difference' wrong. The last word. I'd look into changeing that. It takes away from some of the impact.

Outsider Looking In chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
My God I feel exactly the same way. Really great poem.