Reviews for 1:53 am
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
I liked the fact that this one-shot was short and straight to the point. No huge cliches and drama. I loved the fact that it seemed straight from the heart with no extra accessories. Simply pure and honest. I enjoyed it very much. Good job.
emilywashere chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Aw, this was so sweet and adorable! I loved it. :D
erica chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
you're welcome!
Anaraine chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Oh, darling, this was absolutely beautiful~ I love it. Really.

And it makes me think of AXNA. Ehehe, not to say that AX is a dick... I like him, anyways.

Okay, so you have beautiful imagery here, and lots and lots of exposition (hmn, right word?). I really like the 'bewildered about how you find snoring adorable.' That was so cute! :squees: And I really like your thoughts about becoming part of his daily routine as an unfaltering stability, instead of a daily chore. God, you're so good with words, love.

You make me jealous, really.

Short, sweet, and absolutely adorable. I love you, darling!
ericah123 chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I love how you described the girls thoughts in detail. It caught my attention for the most part. However, watch on your grammar and punctuation! That's it! :]
disconnect chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
aw. wow, that was really sweet.

you're an amazing writer. he sounds

wonderful. ) i hope that you have

more stuff on here. the way you write

is very engaging. i really enjoyed it.
pandorka42 chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
AWE! That's so adorable! Love it. ;)