Reviews for 1:53 am |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the fact that this one-shot was short and straight to the point. No huge cliches and drama. I loved the fact that it seemed straight from the heart with no extra accessories. Simply pure and honest. I enjoyed it very much. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this was so sweet and adorable! I loved it. :D |
![]() ![]() you're welcome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, darling, this was absolutely beautiful~ I love it. Really. And it makes me think of AXNA. Ehehe, not to say that AX is a dick... I like him, anyways. Okay, so you have beautiful imagery here, and lots and lots of exposition (hmn, right word?). I really like the 'bewildered about how you find snoring adorable.' That was so cute! :squees: And I really like your thoughts about becoming part of his daily routine as an unfaltering stability, instead of a daily chore. God, you're so good with words, love. You make me jealous, really. Short, sweet, and absolutely adorable. I love you, darling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you described the girls thoughts in detail. It caught my attention for the most part. However, watch on your grammar and punctuation! That's it! :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. wow, that was really sweet. you're an amazing writer. he sounds wonderful. ) i hope that you have more stuff on here. the way you write is very engaging. i really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWE! That's so adorable! Love it. ;) |