Reviews for Let's Be Mature About This |
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![]() ![]() Wow, amazing! Simply amazing. :) |
![]() ![]() Oh, I loved! Lol, she's hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your work this is just such an enchanting story with real life problems |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yessss! They're in Jamaica! Hollaaa |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great! :D Sydney seems very human and not robotic I like it |
![]() ![]() I really thought that it was stupid that Gavin caved in the end about the family and I found Sydney to be unyielding and immature. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hate your interpretation of "Black" Culture. Which you apparently think is full of young people who aspire to be thugs and that they all complain about "the white man". Did you know that some people join gangs to eat? That they join gangs for safety? That they join gangs because they don't know that they can do better because there are judgmental people like you who assume they don't have hopes and dreams of something other than gang life. You're disgusting. |
![]() ![]() What's your website?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the voice this story is written in.. wish i could've read the rest of it before it was moved. hope to see more of your works on fp |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I can't believe this is the end! I was looking for another chapter! This story was GREAT, I was going to laugh if Sydney got accidentally pregnant. This story was awesome, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks really interesting, looking forward to reading the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe! I loved this story! GO GAVIN! I loved how in chapter 1 she thought he was gay. that was pretty funny. your an amazing author. I hope you continue to write stories. Love AwesomeEyes |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fantastic story! I read it in one sitting. I love that all your romance stories have a realist edge to them. Very refreshing! It's like, "Oh! This love story is so realistic I could imagine it happening to me!" And yeah, I agree with toonmilli. I wish it were longer. Again, great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story! It's so sweet and adorable lol and funny :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw :D how sweet. I so like totally envy Sydney right about now. she has a HOT HOT HOT italian husband with sexy green eyes and sexy black hair and a probably even SEXIER body! ugh. lol i'll go cry now at my unluckiness. anyways, this was a great story ] |