Reviews for By the River
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
fp messed up and repeated your title twice.

I love the way you describe the ricer in those three lines, it's so fitting and so perfect. Really awesome job.

I also like the alliteration in "boundless, blueness" that was a nice description. THe only thing that bothered me in the piece was you have 4 lines for the beginning sentence and the ending one, but only three for the middle one. That just seemed a bit out of place for me.

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Cesalie Chase chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
You, miss, are an extremely talented writer. Not only are you gifted in prose, but your poetry is beautiful. This scene, though simple, is breathtaking, and your skill with stylistic elements (particularly alliteration) is awesome. Reading this poem, I feel like I could close my eyes and feel the warm summer breeze against my face; it's just so tranquil.
Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I loved this. It had such a nice, picturesque quality to it that it can't help but leave a smile on your face. Great job on this and keep up the good work.

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