Reviews for Mother part II
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
"The sullen in her eyes are saying," I think, though I might be wrong, that sullen is an adjective and it should be sullenness.

"and once again there is invisible wounds."... are

I like the piece a lot, your word choices are really wonderful and I love your descriptions of her, very powerful and unique.

PS If your bored check out the Review Game and/or it's Review

Marathon (link in my profile).