Reviews for Kaleidoscope
A. Bush chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
Lovely. Keep it up.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I found the slashes distracting, and they made it hard to read.
MagicalThinking chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
i really like how you organized this-its jagged yet then again it just all falls into place...

its real illustrative, full of imagery and life that you can almost see, very relatable...

_ keep up the amazing writing!
The Exuberant chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
good poem