Reviews for her baby still alive
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
i like how you lead up to were she is goign to abort making it seem like she is then ended it with a kick then her baby is still done. Very well done again.

shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Creepy ending, but I liked this one as well. Pressure from others should never cause you to do something that you will regret and I think you did a nice job of giving of hint of regret this mother was feeling.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
I'm not sure if fp messed up or what, but the first line is repeated twice, one time italized and once not.

Ok I didn't not like the ending, I couldn't tell if you were saying the abortion failed, in which case does that really happen? Or that it was alive in spirit, but that's not really what it sounded like.

I liked the idea of the piece. I like the way you described the baby because it was nice and unique, which definitely added something to the piece since the subject matter is used a lot, it was really just the ending I didn't like

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The Exuberant chapter 1 . 7/17/2008