Reviews for So it is
Coneyisland-Girl chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
again. wow, i think that is my favorite one just because i can relate... i still love how you present the poems using the fonts etc to emphasize certain things to add visual interest. i love that. In my story window..the original formatting has the "beeps" in red but it wouldn't transfer to FP. i also like the distance from the author to the audience. this has a versatile tone that ranges from calm to passionate frustration at the realness of the intensity in which the world can steal mindlessly. this way, as a reader, you feel like the empathetic (and helpless) outsider watching someone disintigrate. A very powerful and different approach. good job