|Reviews for My Hidden Christmas Tree|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I like this poem.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
"This lofty, solid, wistful pine I love alone,"... I think I alone love would sound better
"So one day far within the future,"... in sounds more natural than within to me
I like the last line, it adds something new to the piece. The rest of it I have to say got a bit redundant. I feel like you could say the whole idea of the tree being alone and only you noticing it into one or two stanzas. Still it's a really good idea.
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