Reviews for Paper Boat
Joy digan chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Sher schön, vor allem die Zusammenfassung!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Fp messed up and repeated the title twice.

I liked the last line, it was a nice description that I wasn't really expecting it. However I did not like the word briefly, it just seemed sort of out of place to me.

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Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
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This seemed like a metaphor for life to me, which I liked because I love poems that have double meanings like that. They're so deceptively simple, which is one of my favorite things about poetry.

Then again, I also could've been reading too much into it. But that's okay, because the imagery was really good, too. Just the image of the boat floating down the river...I can see it perfectly in my head.
ChapeauVert chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Simply gorgeous.
Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
There was something about this simple image that I really liked. One thing I would suggest 'bout this though would be to integrate the notion of the boat being 'brave' as you stated in your summary. Anyways, keep up the good wok.

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windy girl chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
I love the summary for this. (I love the haiku, too.) It's one of those momentarily hopeful things.