Reviews for The Carnations
blurrylights chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I liked this! I wish she actually had confronted him, but this was interesting. I wish there was more of an ending for her, but this was very well written as is. Great job!
butterfliesandponies chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Poor wife! Her husband's an EVIL, CRAPPY, BS AND JERK
chimerica chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Urg. Wish you'd continue this but that's probably not going to happen so...nice story. Well, er, not really 'nice' but well-written.

notwithoutyou chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
It was nice, but it would be better with some closure.
RockMusicFreak chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Needs a little bit more closure.
Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
White Rose Blossom chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Aww, I liked this one. It was really well written and I loved how easy it was to "slip inside" the main characters mind because of the way you described it. Also, it was pretty cool reading it with "you" instead of "he" or "him" or whatever it would be. The ending was perfect too.

Great job (as usual _)

ParaKisu21 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Very nicely done. But I kinda want some closure or something more fair for her. Still, its nice this way too.