Reviews for Unearth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Arg! Why is such a good story is left unfinished? I really hoped the author would finish it. Oh well! Great story by the way! |
![]() ![]() I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I only wish it was completed. But this was a great tale, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing it |
![]() ![]() Well damn. I have a HUGE soft spot for well written interracial fics, not a lot of them lurking about these days as it is. So, naturally, I'm so into this right now. Your characters are really pulling me in and I already sympathize with Freddy, the poor guy sitting in an office full of lovely people *shrugs* And this new case! I love a good mystery. Okay, shutting up now *skips off to next chapter* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! It's been a few years! I really miss you updating this story. I've fallen in love with Fred and Laila and I still think about this story from time to time. Do you plan on finishing it? Since this is the first chapter, I won't ask about the loose ends but I really believe this story is worth finishing! |
![]() ![]() I absolutely loved your story... I also loved your sub plot. |
![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I hope you update this soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. I don't know if you're still writing for the story or what, but I just wanted to drop a quick note to express my shear amazement at your ability as an author. I read your brief bio on this site and I can not believe your only 19! You write with such maturity. Every little piece and aspect of this tale seems to be so thoroughly thought out. I read all 24 chapters in one night. The only disappoint is the fact that this is the only story of yours on this site. I do hope you plan to continue. LDK |
![]() ![]() Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tremendous story! So glad I found it. Frederick has to be the hottest guy ever ) I love him. And usually I don't like the females in a lot of these stories but Laila is kicka**. This murder mystery has me clueless. I've guessed about 3 times who it is, and I've been wrong :D I feel bad, because I kinda liked Prof. Clark as shameful as that is ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story...this is one of my favorite chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad you're back! How was Tokyo! This is crazy... I bet Sophia watched and they got into an argument and she bashed her head in... Laila and Fred will find out. This was a great chapter, I hope you're still continuing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! You're back! *looks around, guiltily* I may or may not have completely forgotten about this story, but your return prompted a reread, so thanks :D:D Great update, I can't wait to see where you take this next. One thing: I think you should make the passage of time clearer. Sometimes it feels a bit jumpy and I'm left wondering about the time difference. Other than that, great job! I can't wait for more! Eva |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... you're back. I'm glad you updated! This chapter was great and I'm glad Freddy and Laila are doing the tango so often, lol. Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story! one of my favourites :D hope you update real soon, its been a while :) |
![]() ![]() Ahh i kneww it, i knew it had to be the chemistry teacher! Great job by the wayy... the suspense in this story is amazing! |