Reviews for Don't Wake Up
From The Stone Bridge chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Yor pose reminds me of Luciano Castelli, a photographer of Polaroid, from the Polaroid Book: Selections from the Polaroid Collections...I like him. Maybe you would too. But I dont really know. I dont know you.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
That third stanza is just perfection. Love "slips of naivetyy" and "the trigger of his hologram sincerity." Very nice. The first stanza does feel kinda forced, with the strange images, but that's just me. They're interesting, that's for sure. Good work overall, though. Keep writing! :)
trying chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
I love this. I really love all of your stuff, actually. Everything you write has believability and is beautiful.

Good job on another awesome piece.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
I liked it, good piece :)