Reviews for maybe i'm forgiving my past |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As it is this poem is good, In my opinion I think you should add a line or two about Maybe a dream or add onto the sunset describle the color a bit more. other than that this poem is an excelent start to a longer piece that if added to can be a bit grander |
![]() ![]() ![]() Filled with longing, yearning to be accepted as is. Very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Itching for the sunsets that slipped my groping fingers." Great line! Nice imagery throughout. |