As it is this poem is good, In my opinion I think you should add a line or two about Maybe a dream or add onto the sunset describle the color a bit more. other than that this poem is an excelent start to a longer piece that if added to can be a bit grander

Filled with longing, yearning to be accepted as is. Very nice.

"Itching for the sunsets that slipped my groping fingers." Great line! Nice imagery throughout.