Love this Chapter, we got to see more of them!

I love, love, LOVED this Chapter, keep up the good Work ;)

Ugh, sorry Derricks nice, but I kinda prefer Zane... yeah...

Your story was amazing. Totally did not anticipate that ending. Congratulations on finishing the story. Loved Ryan and how selfless she was. Can't wait for sequel.

Best gift Ryan got from Zane :P.

U killed me with that ending! How could u do that! T_T do u hate me? dead...

P.s loved it until The ending.

omg! i wanted them to be together

this is a great story so far

I love the story but don't like the ending - I guess I'm just a sucker for happy endings and sad ones bring me back to real life.
Despite this I'm not going to leave an angry review. I loved all of the first 16 chapters and I won't let the last one stop me from praising you. You did an amazing job with this story, especially considering you started writing it really young! I love your style of writing!
I guess I'll just make up a happy ending in my head to satisfy myself! ;-)
Well done!

I just reread your story and I've got to review because I don't know if I did my first time through. Nearing the end, I loved how you gave mixed messages about Daniel McAllister. I know she's a fairly minor character, but I loved her personality nonetheless. She was a perfect mix of fantastic(fake or fantasy ish) and realistic. She obviously loves her daughter but still chose her job. Another thing I loved was that you braved hateful reviews to write Ryan as an 'empty shell,' as many people phrased it, and managed to pull it off without making Ryan seem pathetic, like most authors seem to do. I loved he reality of having Bane abandon her before he had the whole truth, because you acknowledge the chances as happily ever after even though the reader can easily imagine Bane coming back when his and Ryan's names weren't splashed all over the cover of So Real. Cheers to a truly talented author.

please change the ending. it feels like it's hanging. I adore Ryan and she ends up being an empty shell at end. It's not fair.

This was. Fucking. AMAZING. It was beautiful, heart-wrenching... and, significantly... realistic. I cried at the end. But it was very appropriate. It's hard to take a story with movie-star characters and make it realistic, but you have done just that... so KUDOS to you! I'm left feeling bittersweet, but it's fitting. I loved how raw and edged Ryan was, yet she was still loveable; you don't get that much in girl characters. This was a fine piece of work, one I will delight in reading again. Though with the sad ending, I don't know if I could put myself through it again... gah. Anyway, I shall stop babbling and go add it to my favs now. _

-Grammar

really enjoyed it

Interesting way to end it.. I loved the story and I couldn't stop reading it once I got started. Although you ended the story in such a loose, cryptic, vague way, I kinda like it because it allows readers to continue the story and imagine it the way they want it. Whether or not that was your intention, I don't know, but nonetheless I still respect you for it. I want to congratulate you for writing such a great story and I hope to read more of your wonderful works in the future

Nice!...i like it xD