|Reviews for Why So Serious?|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
I really like the phrase "eyes are stained shut" because stained was a very unique word choice that made it a great image. I liked that whole descriptions actually, it was nicely done. The only thing is the first line of the second stanza just seemed kinda out of place I'm not really sure why, maybe because the word choice wasn't anything interesting? Other than that it's a really great piece.
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| ChapeauVert chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
I love your style. I found this piece captivating :)