Reviews for The Perfect Leaf
AspiringWriter05 chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
WOW! This is my favorite poem from you. It's so good, love the rhymes, the great vocabulary. The poem just flows perfectly. It is simply beautiful. Great, great work. :)
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
i really enjoyed reading this! i like the rhyme scheme and the words went together really well and flowed nicely. great job :)
Coneyisland-Girl chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
oo i love your vocabulary! my fav stanza was the one about the ruby in repose! i love that. excellent metaphor. i notice you end some of your poems in french. do you speak french... i took two years of french :) anyways. well done. the words fit the tone many can handle that kind of vocab.
sRoze chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Excellent choice of words! I especially loved the last line, because it put the previous stanzas into perspective. Loved how the words just flow seamlessly and naturally.. A beautiful piece, this is. )