Reviews for Early to school
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
I like the mixture of the italics and not italics, it worked really well an added a dimension to the piece.

Your descriptions of the people and their actions, especially the repetition of rushing. It created a rushing feeling, which obviously worked.

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