|Reviews for Playing with Fire|
| Autore Raita chapter 27 . 11/7/2013
That was beautiful.
Its 3 am in the morning and I don't regret reading this at all.
Thank you for writing it :)
| Jae Shin chapter 4 . 8/16/2013
My first thought - Hermione! _
| KateMichelle54 chapter 26 . 7/13/2013
AAAAAAHHHH*continued high pitched squealing until random guy comes up and slaps me*
Ow. Okay, now that that's done, LOVE the story. Seriously, I absolutely ADORE IT. Your writing style is so natural and the charecters are done so well. Right when I think something, such as "where's Lindsay? she can't just disappear! life ain't that convenient!" BAM! Next paragraph, there she is.
I think you know this, but I honest to God believe you should be published. NO JOKE!
I could say more, like how much I love Cameron(AHHH! The quotes, the speech at the show, BEST GUy EVER! WHY CAN'T HE BE REAL!) and can relate to Leah, I sadly must leave. But first:
To the castration of Adam effort, I donate a new weapon - The Justin Bieber CD. Sharpened, used to chop *them* off, then played. Wahhahahaha!
And here's my list of top 5 fictional boyfriends:
1.) Dr. Hawkeye Pierce(Mash TV show)
2.) Dr. B.J Hunnicutt(Mash TV show)
3.) John Reed,(YES I know he was a real person, but I mean in the new movie The Lone Ranger, whom he is)
4.) Dr. Greg House(House TV show, see a trend here? Hehe.)
5.) Jack Dawson(Titanic.)
Reading my list over, I realise that A.) I watch too much old TV/movies B.) House and Jack must be switched, and I am too lazy to do so.
Loved the story! Will be reading your others!
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/2/2013
Beautiful story :)
| William Kayspear chapter 27 . 6/22/2013
You and your damn author notes! I demand an epilogue!
| Ginbrat chapter 27 . 6/19/2013
I absolutely positively loved this book! I laughed, I cried, and I screamed at the computer when necessary. I love the cliche girl falls for brothers best friend and I loved this book even more. I really got into Shakespeare while reading this (I recited the book when no one was around) I'm definitely going to read A Mid Summer Nights Dream because of this. Keep writing, because you have a gift and most certainly a way with words.
| Hannah chapter 15 . 5/27/2013
… I keep feeling like Lindsay is a twelve year old. If that was your intention, you did a splendid job
| Hannah chapter 13 . 5/27/2013
As cute as that ending line was, I feel like Joseph would give her a look like "WTH?"
| Hannah chapter 10 . 5/27/2013
… well, at least Adam will accept a hint if he's smacked with it round the head?
| Shewriteslove chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I think this is about the third time I've read this story. The first time I read it,I was 13. I'm almost 16 now. Every time I read it,I fall more and more in love. That may be because as I grow up,I understand the characters better...each time I relate better to them. The fact of the matter is that you have created characters and a story that have stayed alive in me. You've created a story that I've read countless times and still takes talent. I can see this Getting published and becoming a movie because the characters you write are so likeable and relatable. I don't know if you even get these any more, but I hope you do. And I hope it makes you smile knowing that your a stories have acted as an escape from my drama filled life.
| Your Girl chapter 7 . 1/10/2013
*My real account name. I'm just a tad lazy*
It frustrates me that Cameron interrupts Leah on her date, gets pissy about something that is in no way his business (No way at all), and then she spinelessly apologizes... for what? Kissing her boyfriend and then being dragged out of the car like some possession? At the very least, Cameron should have apologized and Leah should have accepted. In my mind, Cam needed to show some humility by groveling or something. He really acted out of social bounds and common decency, making a fool out of her and accusing her of acting in a wrong way when she really was not. Cameron needs a reality check, badly.
My second concern was the teacher's negative comment about her students' ability to learn. Was it comic relief? Well, when they enrolled in a college level class and have given her no reason to believe that they should lack studiousness, it is really counter intuitive of her to put them down in such a way. It really is just going to make her life more difficult.
Other than the obvious grammar discrepancies and Leah's ability to slightly remind me of the character Bella from Twilight, I see a lot of potential in the way this story will progress, so I am going to continue reading it diligently.
Thank you for being a writer,
| glowingstar101 chapter 27 . 12/22/2012
Loved this! Great job!
| Amber Ice Fox chapter 26 . 12/13/2012
| brinalovesyouxx chapter 27 . 11/23/2012
Such an amazing story! Gosh, i love it all, the plot, the characters, the confessions of love, everything! I definitely have a really good first impression of your writing skills so i look forward to reading more of your stories, keep up the awesome work! :D xx
| pille-ip chapter 27 . 9/25/2012
Amazing story! Just enough of drama/stupid decisions/worried panicking to be realistic ,just enough of tension to be intriguing, and enough love and forgiveness to smooth it out into a happy ending. Plus amazing full and well written, believable characters and good writing style. A true joy to read.