Reviews for Playing with Fire
Your Girl chapter 7 . 1/10/2013
*My real account name. I'm just a tad lazy*

It frustrates me that Cameron interrupts Leah on her date, gets pissy about something that is in no way his business (No way at all), and then she spinelessly apologizes... for what? Kissing her boyfriend and then being dragged out of the car like some possession? At the very least, Cameron should have apologized and Leah should have accepted. In my mind, Cam needed to show some humility by groveling or something. He really acted out of social bounds and common decency, making a fool out of her and accusing her of acting in a wrong way when she really was not. Cameron needs a reality check, badly.
My second concern was the teacher's negative comment about her students' ability to learn. Was it comic relief? Well, when they enrolled in a college level class and have given her no reason to believe that they should lack studiousness, it is really counter intuitive of her to put them down in such a way. It really is just going to make her life more difficult.
Other than the obvious grammar discrepancies and Leah's ability to slightly remind me of the character Bella from Twilight, I see a lot of potential in the way this story will progress, so I am going to continue reading it diligently.
Thank you for being a writer,
YG
glowingstar101 chapter 27 . 12/22/2012
Loved this! Great job!
Amber Ice Fox chapter 26 . 12/13/2012
Great read!
brinalovesyouxx chapter 27 . 11/23/2012
Such an amazing story! Gosh, i love it all, the plot, the characters, the confessions of love, everything! I definitely have a really good first impression of your writing skills so i look forward to reading more of your stories, keep up the awesome work! :D xx
pille-ip chapter 27 . 9/25/2012
Amazing story! Just enough of drama/stupid decisions/worried panicking to be realistic ,just enough of tension to be intriguing, and enough love and forgiveness to smooth it out into a happy ending. Plus amazing full and well written, believable characters and good writing style. A true joy to read.
heal me forever chapter 26 . 8/30/2012
GOD dis is ,...SERIOUSLY..speaking of truth..i have NO WORDS..great nd fablous job wid maintaing d stry yaar..i am just awestuck...by god ...dis is BANG ON...! i totally love cam ...he is just wat u want in a boy...! first kiss thing is d most i adore ...cam nd leah ..forever ...mavellous job..!love dem xxx
ClosetReader chapter 26 . 8/18/2012
Loved the story! (: going into my favourites!
ClosetReader chapter 20 . 8/18/2012
Loved that Leah was cam's first kiss but how on earth did he date callie for months and not kiss her? And if he loved her so much, why did he not try harder?
Neverland.dream chapter 26 . 7/31/2012
Hey! :) I'm not even sure if you'll read this since it was more than three years ago since you finished this, but I would like to say that I LOVE this story. The characters were really special.

When I read a story, I become so engrossed with it that I feel like I'm in the story. Anyway, you're REALLY talented. I hope that you get to read my review.

This story just made my heart soar. :) I LOVE IT SO much I can't even describe it. :) PLEASE keep writing more fabulous stories such as this.

LOVE YOUR WORKS! :)

Your reader who adores you so much,
N.d :)
AnonymousReads chapter 27 . 7/29/2012
Are you going to write a sequel about lindsay you shoul i like this story it was a cliche told in a great way. Good story :)
Guest chapter 27 . 7/18/2012
So great! I loved the romance between Leah and Cameron and also Leah's drastic change in attitude over the course of the story!
MEG0205 chapter 27 . 7/6/2012
Loved the story!
Megan :)
dreeming chapter 26 . 6/27/2012
Lots of love for this! Sometimes, there were whole bunches of cliches that seemed a bit unrealistic (eg- it being Cameron's 1st ever kiss, and Cam confessing on the stage bit), but I must've been in a real sappy mood (your story's that good), because I dismissed them pretty quick in favour of "aww"-ing haha!
Whatsoever chapter 26 . 5/29/2012
Awwwwwwwwwwww.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

This was SUCH a cute story! I'll tell you what parts I loved. The part where he stroked her hips underwater where no one could see. The part where his body 'folded' over hers when they were playing that game. How she was his first kiss and he'd been waiting for her all those years. The part where his hand spread over her back at her dad's wedding.

I loved it, loved it, loved it. made me all warm and fuzzy inside. I was a pile of mush by the end.
twibbit chapter 27 . 5/27/2012
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