Reviews for eleveneleven
Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 8/6/2009
I really enjoyed both of these pieces! Great work. Short but a lot said in them
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Very nice.
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
"between snarls of glowing dragonflies,"

Favorite line. But the whole poem was lovely. I could really picture this.
Faith Adeline chapter 3 . 8/22/2008
Good piece, I liked it :)

CigaretteBurn chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
I loved both of these. I thought they were simple, beautiful, yet complex. Good job -)

Forever the

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
I really like your word choice here, its beautiful. Your descriptions are also really beautiful, powerful and interesting making an amazing piece.

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Ops! This is the review for the second chapter and the review I gave for the second chapter is for the first... sorry!
simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 7/20/2008
I really like the title, I dunno if it was meant to be about making a wish, but that’s how I interpreted it and it was interesting.

I also liked the phrase about the suburbs in atlantis, that was a really great description, interesting and well fitting.

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fractured sky blue chapter 2 . 7/20/2008
love the imagery in the second piece.
Faith Adeline chapter 2 . 7/19/2008
both are good pieces. keep it up!

older ego chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
i like the first line especially, about the suburbs of atlantis, and as far as short poems go i also like the fact that they can evoke so many things at once because of how they're more open to interpretation. this one's done very nicely indeed xD