Reviews for THE SPIDER
L.E. Lamkin chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
This was a fun story. I agree with the other reviewer that the font is a bit strange and something to get used to, as well as the bizarre formatting in some parts of the story. This is a small nuisance however and barely noticed. The story itself was fun and entertaining enough and I guess by the ending, we'll be dealing with an army of giant bugs soon enough! Love those types of stories, heh.
S. M. Saves chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Whoa! Creepy and wicked. A nicely rounded horror story.

The physical appearance of the story confuses me. It's entirely in bold lettering except for three lines which don't seem to house much meaning (sybolismwise). And at the beginning of the piece, the first few lines are half-length (as I would put it) almost as if they were supposed to be a poem of some sort. Might want to look that over.

Other than that, I have nothing to complain about.