Reviews for Undeniably Sexy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is it wrong to want to slap text? Because I want to slap the text that represents that 'beautiful guy' , I also want to giggle madly. Because he's so ridiculous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol aww tav knows he liked it :) |
![]() ![]() OMG...jus OMG!/LMFAO |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow he's really something..i like it so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe you haven't updated! This is such a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the main character.I shall worship him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() xD I read straight through this. My God, it's so addicting. There are very, very few stories that can keep me on the edge of my seat and laughing so hard, and you, my friend, did a very good job. Was not expecting the sex though. Like Tav said, "This is new." Well! I'm hoping you update soon, because for one the relationship with Brendan isn't even completely settled, and two, the thing with his dad. And where he's going to live... |
![]() ![]() ![]() update update update update update update ...please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow hes really conceited |
![]() ![]() Undeniably Sexy is conceited past the point where it's on purpose, past annoying to unbearable where you're compelled to murder. You'd wish to be in the story to torture the main character or the author for stupidity. The story is lame and idiotic and not a single chracter is likable which is BAD. "Sexy" is repeated so many times as if the author were trying too hard to push the fact that the main character is conceited. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love how Tav tried to act like he "accidentally" drove brendan to the wrong house and how they "mysteriously" got naked...it was hilarious. The smut was great b/c it wasn't too raunchy or overly descriptive, but it did seem a little odd to have tiny Brendan top Tav in bed...it's like having some small guy top some other guy twice his size, so it was a little difficult to get into it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG this is one of the greatest and most funniest storys in here! xD I love it and the characters. Tav is a total weirdoe and he's so cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you ever read Ouran High School Host Club? It's a Japanese manga and Tav kind of reminds me of the character Tamaki in it. Also, yay for run-on sentences! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, this was hilarious and very cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so good! I love it! The sheer awesomeness is just awesome! Please update soon! |