Reviews for Undeniably Sexy |
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writesstuff chapter 5 . 8/24/2008 lol I loved this! Tav, Brendon, Brenda and Dace are awesome! XP Can't wait for the update and this is SO going on my faves and alerts! LATERZ -Karlz |
WrittenSound chapter 5 . 8/22/2008 Ooh! Me likey! LOL! Poor Brenny. He's all... Not caring and stuff. Friggen heartless, I swear! And IT'S SO CUTE! You know, everyone wants what they cant have. Bet that's how Tav is feelin', lmao! HAHA! Brendon is so unobservant! (I am too, but that's not the point.) YAY! I gots to see what Brendan is thinking! _ Makes me HAPPY! I hoped he secretly wanted Tav. Guess he doesnt. OH WELL! Update soon and I shall love you forever and continue to show it with my reviews! |
Plej chapter 5 . 8/22/2008 :-D you is hillarious, love your little note at the end. Anyways, until next chapter ... ja ne! |
Happy Pappy chapter 5 . 8/22/2008 Sleepover at Gavin's? Dace and Tav? I cannot wait! Onto this chapter, I'm not sure why but it just didn't keep like it was on the same level as the last four. Perhaps it was the POV switch... I dunno, it just seemed lacking for some reason. Although the last part of Tav's POV was awesome. I'm really not sure how I feel about Brendan's POV. It all sounded kind of forced and just didn't flow as well. I dunno, I'm glad that you shed some light on Ugly's past though, even if it was just the beginning. Things should get interesting in the future. Good luck on the next chapter, you've got me excited! I can't wait to see what lies in the future for 'Go Away' and 'Ugly.' P.S. Nick names rule! |
Cattails chapter 5 . 8/20/2008 Oh, yay! Changing PoVs! :D And even better...a mysterious past! Too bad Brendan came back before Brenda could finish the story...but she did make an awesome cover story. Ah, poor Brendan...he's not going to win. But maybe he could carry chloroform around and use it on Tav when he gets unbearable? :D |
Pancakelin chapter 5 . 8/20/2008 Haha, wow, Tav is always suprising me. Hm, thirteen year old girl sides? I can't wait to see that! Update soon! ~Pajamas |
xClutteredxChaosx chapter 1 . 8/20/2008 Haha I've just read the first half of this chapter and I couldn't stop laughing! Tav is just so in love with himself! But strangely likeable.. in a funny way. Now I've got that over with I just want to say well done for writing this! It's made me laugh and I'm going to read the rest now (for some reason I like to review before I read..which is quite odd :s) |
Happy Pappy chapter 4 . 8/14/2008 No one can hate you for posting short chapters, at least you're still posting them and I'm going to write you an official note from me saying that you don't have to go to school ever because you have much more important duties involving Tav & Friends (sounds like a sitcom) so you don't have to worry about school Onto the chapter. I actually really liked it. It was great seeing Brendan relaxing somewhat and I'm really getting curious about why he doesn't open up. Something tells me there is something more to little Brenny's past than meets the eye. Oh, and I love how everyone at one point had a crush on Gav. That's awesome and I chuckled when Bren spoe up about crushing on Gavin. That really came out of no where. The coming out stories were great too and I think it'd be awesome to see a side-story/flashback thing about that football party... hint hint ] Well, I can't wait for you to update. Keep up the good work! |
WrittenSound chapter 4 . 8/14/2008 O.O WOAH! Gavin MUST be hot or something, lol! This is friggen awesome _ I like the chapter. It may not be the best so far, but it definitely made me laugh and it was worth reading. AW! I bet Brendan is starting to fall for Tav! That's why he's being so nervous and stuff. Brenda sounds fun and entertaining. She, Tav, and Dace make me laugh most, so I hope that was your intention, lol! So... Update soon and I'll love you for eternity! And give you free Hot Pockets every day of the week because of that undying passion. _~ |
Cattails chapter 4 . 8/14/2008 Ah, that was still entertaining XD Well, he's already won Brenda over, at least. It's a good step! I love that they all had crushes on Gav...that just made me laugh a lot. Yup, Tav sure has a flair for the dramatic. What better way to tell your friend you're gay then by making out with your boyfriend in front of him? :D Aha! Brendan is starting to slowly soften up! Or he just completely forgot himself. But I like the softening up idea :P Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Pancakelin chapter 4 . 8/13/2008 Oh, I love this! It's so original! I've never seen anything like it! It had me giggling like an insane person! Update soon, please! ~Pajamas |
Air.you.Breathe chapter 1 . 8/13/2008 *Soon...lol srry :) |
Air.you.Breathe chapter 4 . 8/13/2008 I love it! i love it! I love it! Lol, like all your chapters make me laugh...only thing is if they were just a little bit longer! But other than that, they totally rock! PLEAASSEE UPDATTEE SONN! :] |
seasong chapter 4 . 8/13/2008 Hehehe.. 'Need some lovin?' XD Hahah I laughed hard again! Brendan was adorable in this chapter, and I cannot wait for your next update! Loved it! Oh I'm glad my reviews amuse you, you story amuses me. And Gay Guy Magnet, I might be suffering from that. Most of my guy friends are gay.. total mood killer for the guys who aren't and might be interested in me. ;; I could relate to Gavin! And woo this chapter did not suck, it was pretty entertaining! Update soon! Q. Vesey. |
Happy Pappy chapter 3 . 8/12/2008 Firstly, I'd like to let you know my hot pockets were tasty yum. Now, onto the review. Ugly's gay? Wow, his character just got a lot more interesting. I wonder why he's never dated anyone before and why Brenda considers him heartless. Maybe he really does kick starving homless puppies in the rain. Also, you yet again had a crap ton of awesome one-liners. I absolutely love Tav! If Ugly is too cruel to him then just send him my way... or Dace's way for an 'anger release.' Yes, I'm still hung up on that, sue me. Well, not much else to say here other than keep writing! I just got to read two chapters in a row so you better not deprive me of anymore. Please update soon and I'll share my hot pockets! |