Usually if I intend to read two or more chapters in a row, I'll only leave one review for them all. However, this chapter deserves it's own personal review!

First off... why did I not notice you were still writing this? Maybe I should actually start using the Author Alert thing... Oh well, the important thing is I'm reading it now.

This chapter was absolutely hilarious. Who couldn't predict Ugly turning poor Tav down? The important thing was how he reacted and that was priceless! Now there were many moments that made me laugh. The first one was 'anger release.' That was both funny and... intrieging... nevermind, let's move on. The part where Tav hung up on Gav was also hilarious followed up by Tav's inner rant about sex changes and hot pockets had me first cracking up then heading for the kitchen for some hot pockets.

Alright, now to go read the next chapter which I will be doing whilst nibbling on my Ham 'n' Cheese Hot Pocket D

XDD Travis awesome. Cant wait for the next chapter!

oh my gosh i absolutely love it! hilarious! u do sound pretty sexy...

I love this XD It's just such a crazy premise. Tav is so full of himself...and Brendan makes me smile. And together? Well, that would just be amazing XD I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

omg. i love it. tav is so freaking conceited, and slash stories are always the funniest. its just something about them... keep writing please bc ur now a fav!

M... Hot pockets! LOL! This was GREAT! Tav is SO friggen hillarious when he's messing with Brenden! O.O How could someone resist a beautiful sexy guy if they're gay? I like Brenda, she's all cool and blunt. FUN FUN FUN! I'll continue to read and happily review if you keep up the writing! Update soon!

Tav was a little twisted. I laughed anyway though. Especially the part with his sexy voice, and he made Brendon choke on his pasta salad. I mean seriously, "Good, I hope you die. That’s what you get bastard. For being mean to me and…and for being ugly." that was funny to me.

And Tav will NEVER drop the "yeah so, you're ugly" thing. It's just his trademark. I am so taken by his goofy, narcissistic character.

I worry so much for Brendon's wellbeing now that Tav has discovered how joyful making someone's life miserable can be.

Once again, nicely done!

Q. Vesey

I was laughing so hard when Tav was rejected! I still felt bad for him at the same time though. There were a few mistakes, minor as they were probably due to typing fast whilst thinking. You know, when you don't write what you think? But other than that, I loved it.

I thought the Tav/Dace action was sexy. And the phone call with Gavin was hilarious. I can't believe Tav hung up on him, but then again... it's Tav. And threatening his sexiness is a punishable act!

I really enjoyed this chapter. And experimentation with different POV is a cool experience. Gives your readers more characters to dive into and lose themselves in. I adore Tav, I now adore you, and I SUPER adore this lovely story!

Q. Vesey

You're not failing! At least I don't think so.. This is nicely written and I adore Tav! He reminds me so much of my alter-ego. Gavin is the only sensible person is this story. He hasn't lost his mind. I think I would slowly get annoyed by Tav, because there isn't enough room for TWO huge egos!

Gorgeous love, continue the great work!

Q. Vesey

Haha. Love the story. It makes me chuckle. hehe. I love Tav. It's amazing someone can be that selfabsorbed, 'tis hilarious. . Anyways love the story, keep it up!

This was great, and again friggen hillarious! Thanks for the funny ramblings of Tav, they're so coot. He didnt even consider that another guy might be straight? That made me laugh so hard! So, D thanks again for the hillarious peice. It makes me smile!

Aww, poor Tav. Sexiness Denied.

New chapter soon, please?

I have been so bored with other stories people have been putting up recently, so I was super excited to finally find one worth reading.

This story has promise, for sure. Keep Writing!

Oh the awesome!

I really liked this first chapter, it was hilarious. Tav is so concieted it's funny and the way he talks about Ugly... I mean, Brandan just cracks me up. "Aw, Ugly has a name" was an awesome line but that's just the beginning. You had a lot of great one liners in this that I loved.

I really hope you update this because I think it'll be really fun!

Oh, and thanks for the review.

Until next time!

.ilze

HAHAHAHA! This is hillarious! Keep goin pwease! I dont know why, but I think I've become addicted to Slash... But, anyway, I think Dace would be a better match with Tav, if Ugly doesnt wanna be with him! hehehe! OR, sorry, Brendan!