Reviews for Undeniably Sexy
WrittenSound chapter 6 . 9/9/2008
Oh! This was SO hillarious! I pick the BLUE PILL! I have no idea what it's for, but I like blue better! :P Anyways, WRITE MORE! I lurv this SO much!
PSYCNese chapter 6 . 9/8/2008
I agree. You are a dork. l0l but hey all excellent writers are. this is my favorite slash ever. I had to make Milton read it... she commented a while ago. and yes its a she. but about the story... THAT WAS FREAKIN HILARIOUS! dude u totally should have made them put heels on his feet so when he jumped up he nearly fell over...that would have been the icing on the cake, hey cool ive always wanted to use that line. lame i kno but so what. i read and comment your story and thats all that counts. and i totally wish they would have forced brendan to come over. that would have been the nuts on the icing on the cake...hey! red velvet...my favorite. LMA0. plz keep writing. and i totally deserve to b mentioned in your next chapter bc of my awesomeness and longness and finally 17ness. l0l! dace if my fav.
clowneygirl chapter 4 . 9/2/2008
This is really cute. Tav is so over the top that it's hard to find him as offensive as I know he is. If that makes any sense. lol Anyway, I know you said you're starting school so good luck with that and I can't wait for the next update. :)
kitty the pirate chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Ahahaha I love this story so far! Can't wait for chapter 7!
jaeeeee chapter 6 . 8/30/2008
Okay so...um there's this fic and well its kind of turning me into an addict..but the thing is my mom says that its not good to be an addict so i sneak and read this fic sometimes but im not 'posed there's these 2 guys,there names are Tav Brendon and they make me smile every time i think of em.I would really appreciate it if there was a lot more of these guys around in the near future...u get my drift?ne ways the whole point of this ridiculously long and random review is: When U Update, U make my Day!So U wouldn't want me to be sad now would ya? Ya i thought not so guess what U can do 2 make me happy?

Lol-Monica Furious]
Happy Pappy chapter 6 . 8/29/2008
This was a good chapter. Sure, it was just pointless filler but it was fun pointless filler! D

Poor Gav, his friends are evil. Although the thought of Dace using his sexy skill powers to catch Gavin off guard is definatly something worth thinking about... *makes the offical Dace/Gavin fan club*

I can't wait for the next update to see if stuff happens! ]
writesstuff chapter 6 . 8/29/2008
lmao I thought this was funny! :D Update soon, plz! Love ya lots if you do! (not in the creepy way, at least XP)

Bye!

~Karlz
Milton chapter 6 . 8/29/2008
Haha! That was adorably wicked. Tav and Dace are so easy to fall in love with. Their like two smexy kittens tangled in yarn :D I like the randomness of the chapter, just gives us a better chance to get a feel of each character but I'm definately looking foward to more Brendan and Tav though. How could no one fall for that devilish charm? LoL. I had been wondering about that whole ordeal with a guy like Gavin having friends like Tav and Dace.

Are you going to do anymore chapters with the story from Brendan's point of view so we can get more of an insight of what he's thinking?

But other than that, I WANT MORE! LoL. I'mma fan.

-Milton

P.S. I like the red pill but both...makes me think of tylonel :o
Give'EmHellKid chapter 6 . 8/27/2008
Haha, this story is seriously hilaious. And I was so sure they were going to rape Gavin.

Ugly sounds cute though. Haha ]
Pancakelin chapter 6 . 8/27/2008
Hahaha, this story never ceases to amuse me. Poor little Gavin, so vulerable... Yay, Brendan's going to get in on the action! Update soon!

~Pajamas
Cattails chapter 6 . 8/27/2008
Pft, that was awesome revenge. They are terrible people XD Poor Gavin... Hm, now they have blackmail material...that can't be good... And I love Gavin's mother for lending them the dress!
kazoua chapter 6 . 8/27/2008
haha. Well, this was pretty much filler, but I like it anyway. Silliness is good.
kazoua chapter 5 . 8/26/2008
A little exchange thing, I suppose. You review me, I review you. Well, as for the story, I like it. It has this humorous quality to it but doesn't stray into that obscure genre in which everything is over exaggerated. It's funny, how Brendan thinks apposed to how Tav acts.
T.Rose chapter 5 . 8/24/2008
Wow, this was hilarious. I loved it! Tav is definitely my favorite character! He's egotistical, funny, and random!

I also like Dace. He's adorable, really. He reminds me of a puppy.

Good work so far!

~T. Rose~
Milton chapter 5 . 8/24/2008
Omgoodness gracious! That was so fun to read! My friend recommended your story to me and now I just wanna read more. I think your dialouge is so genius. Very inspiring I might add. Tav's point of view throughout the first chapter and the fourth is so charming and catchy...he's just so bubbly. I love it! Thanks for the great read on a rainy day~! I look forward to you updating. :D
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