Reviews for maybe I miss you
night62611 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
beautiful, the mid section is what won me the most
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
I have one issue with the piece, is the title part of the piece or not. The way you bolded it made it seem like it was the title, but the first unbolded line referred back to it which confused me.

I did like the piece though, your descriptions were absolutely beautiful. I especially love the line about stepping into your body, that was a really beautiful image.

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Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
'tis well written. It posesses a good amout of simalies and imagery. Well done
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
good poem. The word esophagus makes me laugh, but i think that's just me.