|Reviews for Dangerous Territory|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
"Whats this fire"... What's
"But he engulfs my heart and soul."... what he? you never reference a he after this line, so that confused me.
I liked how you went back and forth with the conversation towards the end, that was a nice touch. I did not really like the ending, I felt it was a bit anti-climatic to the rest of the conversation they were having.
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