|Reviews for Different|
| A. Lleyn chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
this is very emo. definitely not as good as your other works. i think this works as a song. emrm, dun really liked the "she stilled" line. "swirl before her eyes" and "the ringing is far from her ears" is beautiful though. i think the imagery, which is your forte, after all, could hav been stronger. It's not that hard to figure this poem out. its not as deep as last love, for that one i actually had to pay close attention.
| The Exuberant chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
i liked the rhyming