Reviews for Tales of Lust |
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![]() ![]() ![]() no m/m? |
![]() ![]() hehhe :P it was great...loved the ending,t'was funny :) keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() OMGomgOMG (okay... this omg-ing is getting annoying) BUT OMFG! *blushes* hahaha I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE GONNA USE MY NAME! that chapter was fucking epic. *another omg* :D seriously,wow. it was awesome yes,it did cheer me up p |
![]() ![]() o another chapter D hm... *professional comment* Dear Sheldon. I'd like to announce you that i really enjoy reading your stories.I need to say that I feel that you're very talented,and that I love your style of writing,like how you used the words in that sentence "she played them across the tip of his manhood." etc heehe did i sound like i knew what i was talking about? *Corina's comment* OMFG i love it the main characters must have had so much fun... lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() You switched tenses halfway through, which threw me. but, it was good other than that. hopefully the next one is longer. Faith |
![]() ![]() Well... OhMyDog it's amazing! honestly,wouldn't be saying that if i didn't mean it some bits look familiar.. *giggles* great job (: |