Reviews for a calm that will never arrive
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
It seems a bit of a contradiction to say "a love i cannot contain" AND "i am intangible, empty". Though I can see what you mean, at least I think so. The stuff of dreams are as such, aren't they? Good poem, I liked the constant theme and the thought in general.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Review Marathon! (If you're confused, there's a link on my profile.)

I loved the last line. It seemed to sum up the emptiness of dreams so perfectly; that it's not real life and therefore you're not gaining anything by living in them. I liked the rest of the poem, too, though; it did a good job setting up that last line.