Reviews for Squared
Erin the Lunar Wolf chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I really like this poem. Maybe its just cause I like math. Anyhow one way or the other this is a really good poem. I like the end where you say all problems have a solution its a very nice optimistic end to the poem.
Nighteh chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Very cool. :] Love as a math problem awesome idea. In parts of the poem, some of the flow seemed a little off (for example, the line "it was harder to take in" in the first stanza bugged me), but - unfortunately - I'm not a good enough poet/critic to suggest ways to change this. Still, great work overall, and very original. Keep it up.