Reviews for Desert Rose
Zoey McCusker chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Well, that one was A LOT better than the other one i reviewed of yours.

You had just a few spelling errors, but nothing serious.

I really love the way that you put old knoweldge in new terms and made it interesting.

But... what is the point of this story? Is it to prove that everything plays a part in your life, or... what? A little clearer next time or finish it.