Reviews for Prison in Fire
Ersa Crayold chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Oh my god, this story is amazing. I love it and all the mystery but I feel like you're just kind of fooling the reader.

No offense but because you never explain all the questions you bring up (and don't seem like you're going to because it's Complete) it kind of just feels like you didn't know the answers to begin with.

This could just be my opinion though.

In any case, excellent grammar and punctuation.
Zoey McCusker chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
I'm impressed with your lack of gramatical and spelling errors. But all the same, work on the mystery.
Zoey McCusker chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Well... I'll let you know what I think when I quit shaking.

I mean, it was very well written and you have some good talent, but... why so mysterious?

Again, your talent was the only thing that kept me reading. If anyone else had written a scary story like that, I would ahve been gone in a flash.