Reviews for Stuck
xoxokristen chapter 5 . 2/10/2009
so i have already read the story (and reviewed the last chapter, thus me reviewing in ch 5) and i love it! anyways, i was browsing through the stories on my alerts and came across this one again. and i just wanted to say that i am really looking forward to the next chapter. when is keegan going to be showing sarah the "bad" part of life, or whatever it says in the summary?

xoxokristen chapter 6 . 12/31/2008

I can't wait to read more. Is Keegan's business going to start messing with her life? How will she get involved? Please update again, I had to wait so long for this last chapter
DreamBubble chapter 6 . 12/31/2008
Yea, the chapter felt a bit vague and unfinished. But no worries, if you want to take the time to develop it, then you're welcome to. I'll be waiting eagerly for more. Keep writing!
EsiuoL chapter 5 . 12/25/2008

That was great! I do really hope that you can update ASAP.
inkybetterdays chapter 5 . 10/18/2008
This looks really interesting. There are some grammatical errors though - mostly a lot of run-on sentences. But other than that, it's great!
DreamBubble chapter 5 . 10/17/2008
So far, I like where you're going with the story. And I like surprises! Lolz. But I wouldn't mind seeing Keegan and Sarah have some sort of an encounter where it gets her to develop herself as a character and makes her more feminine and more worldly than she is right now.

I mean, she already knows hints of how cruel life is through Caleb and how shifty it is through Keegan. But its almost like she's ignoring it right now and it would be nice for her to encounter these problems head on and mature. Maybe she'll become part of the FBI unit and have an encounter with Keegan. Oh...that would be a sizzling moment. Hehehe. Forbidden love.

But again, this is your tale to tell and I personally like where its going right now. Keep up the good work. D
DreamBubble chapter 4 . 10/16/2008
Hot stuff! Keep going! D
xoxokristen chapter 4 . 10/16/2008
I really like this story and i want to see more of keegan and sarah(?)! Please update again soon!

PS. is keegan's family like the mafia or something?
EsiuoL chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
Wa... her mother left! O.o!

I wanna know what would happen next... nyahaha!

please update soon...!
DreamBubble chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
Oh no, her mom left? Aw, I wanna knw more about Keegan. Wow, this is getting cool. Keep going!
xoxokristen chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
i like this story and you are fast on the updates, thank you. Please update again!
We Used To Wait chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
Aww, it's so sad. Just be careful about run-on sentences. Anyway, I love it.

-Please, please update soon!
EsiuoL chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Woah! I really want to know what would happen next! kya! Please update soon!
Wheezy Giggle chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Great description and use of similies, Keep it up and update soon!
xoxokristen chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
okay, you have my attention. lets get another update please
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