Reviews for Me? I'm with Cupid |
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Cupcake cat chapter 20 . 7/31/2015 Best story ever! You just have to contiue it. I'm going to freak out if you don't. no joke! |
lizzy1414 chapter 1 . 10/27/2014 Is this story ever going to be finished...? :) |
starry123 chapter 1 . 8/19/2014 Dear author, I just finished reading your amazing story ' Me?I'm with Cupid'. I love the characters and the descriptions but I absolutely loved the ideas for the plot. I was so hooked in with the cliffhangers, I felt the same emotions with the characters and I laughed out loud in some moments ( some people gave me some weird looks ...). I loved the ideas and details with the marks for cupid and the past self. I was so excited when you finished the book with the amazing cliffhanger and I immediately clicked on your page for the next book. I was so disappointed when you didn't even start on the next book. I read on your profile that you were thinking about making more books about the story and with different points of view. I still have hope that one day you might continue. Eager reader, - starry123 ;) |
Shadowkiller176 chapter 20 . 12/6/2012 Well, since it isnt marked complete, i am going to follow it so please continue! |
vampireprincess003 chapter 20 . 8/14/2012 Omg I love this story! UPDATE PLZ ITS BEEN SO LONG ITS CRUEL TO KEEP US WAITING THIS LONG |
Preposterous chapter 3 . 7/3/2012 Lol. She got her wish to see Cupid! Love the title of this story btw. |
Yesterday's Secrets chapter 20 . 4/29/2012 Oh god. So far, this is the BEST fiction that I have ever read here in FP! it's so effin' brilliant. Twists after twists, turns after turns. It doesn't seem to stop; and I love it! Your story plot is so unpredictable! Like seriously. I would've never known that the Cupid Mark can kill them. Initially, I never thought that this story has a very deep plot and has so much to uncover! It's so freakin' fantastic! I don't think I'd ever want to get off this roller coaster ride. XD I also admire the way you write. You have a way with words. Although I notice some grammatical errors concerning the consistence of tenses. But otherwise, your natural flow of words made up for it so I'm more than contented with it. But here's the thing; when will you update? Sigh. It's been more than a year the last you updated. :( I'm so hoping that you won't drop your work. So yeah. Please update! My curiosity is mentally killing me! Gaah. XD Anyway, thank you very very much for the good read. It's an awesome story, I swear. Do continue writing! Much Love, Hazel |
TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret chapter 20 . 1/13/2012 ok ok, this is a really cool story and all, but...is it over? is that it? are there more chapters to come? (i hope only the last answer has a yes to it!) It's really good and Ugh! I knew there was something fishy about that man-slut Chad guy! Ever since the library thing where he showed up right after Cole left...yeah, I knew! ...though I was betting on him being some other kind of god or a present life Demitri that was trying to stop his curse from ever being ended...all that jazz. One suggestion that I have for you, though I'm not really sure if it's a suggestion or not- Sidney seems to have this whole you-only-mention-something-happening-when-it-has-something-to-do-with-Cole thing going on, and quite frankly it almost didn't seem like she even went to school the last couple weeks. I can see how in a certain way you're trying to give off that impression because you're trying to give off the impression of how she's not even noticing her friends at school or all that stuff about the leaking gym and the dances which is a good way to write! (you don't get stuck narrating her entire life story and saying boring things like 'the days at school flashed by and Sidney wasn't doing her homework because nothing seemed to matter but finding a way to fall in love so Cole could live.' etc.) But while you do have that going for you, if you're already giving that impression, (the whole passing-through-school-without-it-mattering impression I mean) then you don't really need to mention that Sidney hadn't cared or noticed that the Boy Toy auction and the Valentine dance and the Winter Formal hadn't happened- I get that there may be a few unhappy reviews about how you promised a dance and didn't deliver cause you forgot about it (maybe it's just me, but that leak did seem a bit convenient ;) ) but you already gave the impression of SAVE-COLE-NOTHING-ELSE-MATTERS thing, you don't need Sidney musing about that in her head. The way my teacher always said it (so concise my teacher, few words are enough for her. Lucky.) 'Show, don't tell' Which I think you did great showing, you just need to realize that as long as her friends are still calling and she's like 'sorry I'm busy trying to save the love of my life' or something, blowing them off, then you don't really need to shout to us readers that 'EVERYTHING ELSE IS DIMINISHING IN IMPORTANCE TO HER (and me) RIGHT NOW', we are actually getting that nope, Nicole, Amber Bass (with a big Ass) and all those other super models don't really matter. We're good, we get you, it's like the beach-body motto 'you're closer than you think' only with a small twist, we're smarter than you think! At least us good readers, who you know, those are the people you actually want as your audience, not just those people who leave a review like 'oh how great! keep up the good work!' Sorry, I refuse to be insincere, or tell those who over-dramatize everything that they're good. Anyway! Done with my little rant here! you're a great writer, just...do a bit less telling, cause your showing is working for you. And keep writing! :) (that was my Lockhart smile, you should be able to hear the Ding! and be blinded by the light from wherever it is that you live) |
superbookgirl chapter 20 . 9/10/2011 This story is freakin' great! I really like this so much so please please please please please update soon! ) |
SakurasApprentice chapter 20 . 8/12/2011 Love this story so frickin much . I really thought Cole was going to die T_T but he's alive :) and cured? Yay! :D This has a little bit of everything but what I like is the fact that the romance isn't shoved in your face I wonder what's going to happen next? Looking forward to the next chapter! |
redambrosia chapter 20 . 8/8/2011 I cannot stop reading your story! It combines my favorite things: hot guys, romance, mythology, and renaissance! |
Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 5 . 6/9/2011 Oh my gosh.. So, I think I know who Sidney is supposed to be, or at least who she is connected to in terms of mythology. She's connected to Psyche. Also, if I'm not mistaken the other women in the nightmare is Aphrodite, but I may be overusing my mythology knowledge here Kudos on a wonderful chapter: ~ Fleur |
Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 4 . 6/9/2011 This scene is really funny because it shows that Cupid can get frustrated. Also, great job using the letter, and the dates, as plot devices. I am intrigued by this and still haven't quite figured out what to make of the portions of the letter used in each chapter. Kudos on a comical chapter: ~ Fleur |
Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 3 . 6/9/2011 The reveal comes at the perfect time for the pace of the story. It also gives the reader a bit of a nice shock and something to look forward to. Nice job using his Greek name for the character's surname. That's a really good play on it. Kudos on an amazing chapter: ~ Fleur |
Fleur-de-lis Evans chapter 2 . 6/9/2011 The sibling relationship between Sidney and Kevin is so believable. You write their chemistry as brother and sister really well balancing humour with the natural snarkiness siblings share. Kudos on a fantastic chapter: ~ Fleur-de-lis Evans |