|Reviews for Me? I'm with Cupid|
| A.L. Holland chapter 7 . 8/31/2008
Well you're very welcome, though I'll be honest and admit I don't remember what I said in my last review. P
OF COURSE I loved it, just like the whole story, and I'm gonna say it's a pretty safe bet that I'll continue to love it.
Update soon! :D
| Queen Of Laughs chapter 6 . 8/19/2008
i cant wait for more!
| A.L. Holland chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
Oh my God.
I'm loving this SO very much. Please, please, PLEASE update soon. I can't believe more people haven't been reviewing! It's just a fantastic story. I was hooked since the meeting of 'the Adonis' P
I can't wait for more!
| frigoetmoi chapter 6 . 8/15/2008
yeay. this is lovely :) i wanna read more, so update soon. :) btw, how can her brother be 6mths older ?
| readingismything chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
nice chapter...grandma Mildred sounds scary...poor kids.
check out my stories if you can.
| Aqua Revolver chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
I really can't wait for the next chapter
But no rush though!
| underCOVERnali chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
Great Job! I mean it, I love the way you are leading the story. Cant wait to see more.
Hope it wont be long untill you post the next chapter!
| underCOVERnali chapter 5 . 8/14/2008
GREAT CHAPTER! Really, it was funny, exiting, i loved it! and also, Cole, awsome name!
Cant wait for more...
| underCOVERnali chapter 4 . 8/13/2008
LLOOVVEE IT! Didnt see the "lets date, as an expiriment" thing coming. Great job, keep it up.
...on to the next chapter...
| underCOVERnali chapter 3 . 8/13/2008
Good chapter! Loved how you ended it, LOVE the way u describe Alexander. Im just a sucker for the "black hair, blue eyes" image on a guy P
Keep it up!
| underCOVERnali chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
Again, great job. But there are a some little things i would like to point out, not trying to be mean, just well, i know feedback is always helpful.
First, keep an eye on how you are writing, you tend to switch from past narration to present when it should be past, or from present to past when it should be present.
Secound, how is it possible that her brother is 6 months older than her? Because if i do the math, its well, impossible. Unless she was way premature. Or, the other explanation is if they are step-siblings, which so far it doesnt seem like it. Yeah, i know petty, and sorry about that. But i have come to realize that one has to be petty when writing. Hope you take this "critic" in stide, do not mean to offend.
Again, overall, i think your story is good. So, I'm on to your next chapter.
| underCOVERnali chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
I know that its just the prologue, but its well, the prologue. Its hole point is to catch the readers attention and let me tell you, you did a great job!
So, now im going to leave so I can continue with the other chapters ]
| scarletlady77 chapter 2 . 8/5/2008
Nice story so far! I've gotten through chapter 2. It's very interesting and the first-person perspective is done very well. Your writing is mostly error free (although just a couple of spelling/ usage errors)
I'll keep reading the rest, and I'm excited to do so.
| readingismything chapter 5 . 8/1/2008
this is absolutely brilliant! i can't wait to read the next update. get the next chapter out asap!
| TammyS3 chapter 5 . 7/26/2008
Is Cole Cupid? or another Adonis? Did he GO to that school before Sydney came? I'm just so cunfudeldedD