Reviews for That Stupid Idiot
DA-chen1 chapter 36 . 5/9/2012
I like your story! Really sweet!

cottoncandy chapter 36 . 5/8/2012
Hi. First of all, please do not be offended by what I'm going to say because I mean well and I come in peace. Pinky swear. Anyway, I just noticed that there were a few wrong "your" and "you're" usage. And though they were very minimal, they still kind of (sort of. a little bit. just a little) affect the aesthetic of the story. Please be mindful of those errors, no matter how little they are. I assume you already know this, but keep in mind that there's nothing more appealing to a reader than a well-written story.

Second, despite my rant above, I want you to know that I enjoyed reading this and your other works. I love your characters, especially your protagonists. They're weird in a hilarious way, which makes it fun to read your stories.

And third, well, there's no third. Hehe. Keep writing!

lots of love,

me :)
GCA chapter 36 . 5/4/2012
Loved this story! It was hilarious I could not stop laughing!
Gretel Snaps chapter 4 . 4/1/2012
Haha, this is really funny. 8D
Lili and RayRay chapter 36 . 2/16/2012
I love this story. I was basically dead from all the laughter :P.

Nick is so adorable with all his cute pick up lines.
Melissa chapter 36 . 2/9/2012
Ice Bubble chapter 36 . 12/28/2011
*my dad is snoring now... hehe*

LOVELY! BRAVO! WELLA! and all that. ) xoxoxo
Ice Bubble chapter 35 . 12/28/2011
Ice Bubble chapter 34 . 12/28/2011
Sweety wheaty!
Ice Bubble chapter 16 . 12/27/2011
Aww! I feel to cry but I can't because I have to be quiet because my daddy's over there and I'm not supposed to be on the computer because I'm supposed to go to bed.

Ice Bubble chapter 4 . 12/27/2011
LOL! This is hilar*couch*ious! Sorry, i've got a cold. I kid!
Starcrazed chapter 36 . 12/23/2011
Love you're story it's hilarious
Exsomnis chapter 36 . 12/22/2011
I have died 6000 times because I had to stop and recover 600000 times from reading this while dying of 600000000000000 fits of laughter.


kara chapter 36 . 12/17/2011
I'm sorry, but that story was just... so stuffed of un-original ideas. The idea of them getting closer because they just so happened to have been assigned to the same artificial baby-how overdone is that? I guess I should have been expecting something like this from a humor story, but there just simply isn't enough content. The only characterization I could see about Michelle was that apparently she's pretty daft and that you apparently tried too hard to make her cute. It should come more naturally. I don't know why that really irked me.

Just a suggestion- don't overload the physical descriptions like in chapter 3. It's nice that they're hot. But that just gets really stale.

This story made me laugh here and there, though.

Aradia Cloud chapter 11 . 12/14/2011
'Call me uncle Nick.' LOL.
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