I'm sorry, but that story was just... so stuffed of un-original ideas. The idea of them getting closer because they just so happened to have been assigned to the same artificial baby-how overdone is that? I guess I should have been expecting something like this from a humor story, but there just simply isn't enough content. The only characterization I could see about Michelle was that apparently she's pretty daft and that you apparently tried too hard to make her cute. It should come more naturally. I don't know why that really irked me.

Just a suggestion- don't overload the physical descriptions like in chapter 3. It's nice that they're hot. But that just gets really stale.

This story made me laugh here and there, though.

-kara

'Call me uncle Nick.' LOL.

I have loved this story from beginning to end and I just have to say its so so so so so so so cute also that its sad that Kyle and Stacey didn't work out though at least you made them friends :) AMAZING STORY !

-U MadeMyLifeComplete-

Just finished the sequel... I love it! I have to say, though, Aunt Becca is the. Best. Uncles wives cousin. Ever. I Liked Natalie better as the Evil Nemisis, though. It was a bit creepy to see her nice without a motive... All in all, love the story, love the characters, love you! In the most non-creepy way possible, of corse :)

I know you have more chapters out... But i think this one was the only one i had to stand up and throw five bajillian walruses into the air for. Justin and, er, that one girl's first fight... Damn, i dont even remember her name... But really, the story is ten times better than any name, but maybe in my head she'll be known without her name, and i'm pretty sure she'd like it no other way :)

Aww this story was adorable and so funny! Great job on it! :D

great story! i absolutley adore susan anj justin! i even like natalie and her dad. this should be an actual book :)

I LOVE THIS.

'Nuff said :)

Hello! I'm Ciara, a judge from A Drop Of Romeo. This story has been added to our archives for Humour stories with the following review.

That Stupid Idiot is a story that draws in the reader with the unfolding relationship of Susan and Justin from classmates in Sex Ed class to friends. Though Justin holds the infamous title of 'School's Most Popular' and he has the two-faced Queen Bee, Natalie, for a girlfriend, he's actually a nice friendly person. Susan herself is a strong lead with a distinctive voice. She isn't the typical intelligent loner as she struggles with school and often argues her point, even with the teachers, frequently landing her in trouble (and detention). Though the main characters are well developed, the supporting characters feel a little flat to start and take a while to flesh out, most of this occurs around the story's climax. That Stupid Idiot is very funny in places, causing me to laugh out loud (including one incident where the laptop screen became covered in orange juice). The character of Mrs Rod, Justin's mum provides a lot of comic relief throughout with her comments and odd behavior. IncapableDreams has an impressive style of writing that flows easily. Though there are quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes, they do not detract from the story as a whole. That Stupid Idiot is completed and although it exceeds thirty chapters, they are of a reasonably short length that makes it easy to devour this story in a few sittings.

hahah i like th aunt

hahhahaha

hahahahah my sister is like that with spiders she had one on a towel once and i had to get another because the spider touch it.

i sooo think the same about english i mean when is poetry going to help me in live really.

Awesome story and Hilarious too! I swear,this is the first story I've read in fictionpress that made me laugh this hard. Justin and Susan are just sooo cute!

That was amazingly funny and I love it!