Reviews for Wolfheart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Let's see, Sara's family got turned in 1926, and she's fifty years old. So 192650-17 1959. But there's laptops? Uhh, I think there was a miscalculation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting read thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I dedicated my whole day to reading your story. Yeah, it was definitely worth it. I listened to that song, The Goldfish Song, and it was amazing. The lyrics are friggin sweet and fit perfectly. and 100 Years just makes the whole thing mesh. Like, there really couldn't be a greater song to end the story's playlist with. I applaud your work. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute ending. It was a great story. I think that certain characters could have been a little more developed, like Nat and Emett. I loved Kariss, even though I never mentioned her in my reviews. She was wicked cool. And Cale and Sara just seemed so real. Like, they had their own legit personalities. I loved it. Great romantic tension and humor as well. Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING FIGHT SCENE. OMG. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. I congratulate you. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I loved how the fact that Cale bit Cecilia's tale before on that last full moon was an ultimate indicator on which wolf was Cecilia. AND THEN SHE GOT AWAY? WHAT IS THIS MADNESS? STUPID MR. BARREN. IM SO MAD AT HIM RIGHT NOW. I wish Cale had killed him. He definitely deserves to die or something. Please kill him off. Haha. But great great great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Never knew he had a sister. Cale just won't stop being smacked in the face with problems to overcome. Sucks for him XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I can't even believe Cale had the guts to do that. What the HELL WAS HE THINKING? How could he be so stupid? Sara is going to change anyway at the full moon, and he thinks that breaking up with her will make her too heartbroken to fight? What an idiot! I'm so mad at him now. Was that really the only thing he and Wolf could come up with? Honestly? |
![]() ![]() ![]() CECILIA? So THAT's where she went? She got turned into a wolfheart? What is up with this? SOO TWISTED. I LOVE it. And the wolf. That was weird. Is it like a completely different person inside him? Gosh I'm so eager right now! Amazing plot twists. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. (Again) So what's going to happen now? Surely, they wouldn't let him phase inside the house. That would ruin everything. Cause wayy too much suspicion. Wow, this is getting intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved their bickering at dinner. Very humorous. And I love how you're putting time down to deepen their relationship. Great for character developing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahahaha RAPE! But this wasn't as awkward as you'd think. Especially since this is expected to be a supernatural story. But again, Cale's reaction was a little too light again. And Inever would've thought HE would become one of them! AH! Good plot twist. That's one thing I didn't see coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so this was good. I loved the descriptions. But I think that Cale's reaction to the whole thing was a little too light. But maybe thats a part of his personality. Idk maybe not. Haha yeah. Good chapter though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. Okay. So whats with the whole wolf in his backyard thing? And it seems that Sara is obviously a wolf. Or, a werewolf. Or something. Haha, sorry if you didnt mean for it to be obvious, but it kinda was. Yeah. The whole full moon kinda gave it away as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I'm reading another story of yours. It seems like Cale is a cool guy. I think Nat and Emmett should be a little more developed. But it's only the first chapter. And based on the reviews I've seen, it gets a lot better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "As for Nat, well, there is someone that I can call an amazing friend like Nat was to Cale." THAT'S ME, right? ;P |