ok great chapter but im still a bit fuzzy on the whole treasure and committing suicide part...can u clear that up for me...much appreciation...]

Okay, so what we'd be doing here is looking for people who really are on the fence about whether or not they still want to be alive, and we're going to offer them a prize to choose the side of life. But no one ever takes it.

That seems a little weird. I like to say that money solves any problem except one, and that's the one that kills you.

Perhaps her curse is that she has to offer money, instead whatever the person honestly needs?

Still wondering,

lol tree branch...i get that agitated sometimes when drawers wont open...but i loved it

Okay, prologue, intro, then a chapter where the protagonist is going to leave town?

Um...

You need to post the next chapter soon!

I need to understand what's happening,

i liked it...nice and to the point...not like other stories ive read where i sit there for hours trying to figure out what and why i was reading it..lol..keep writing you are talented

Would you really have me believe that one cannot find caffiene at a soda fountain? :o) Eva cannot possibly be trying hard enough...I'd recommend the adding the words "bean-derived" to that sentence.

Now, so far the story is well laid-out...just a little teaser in the prologue and a relatively normal first chapter.

Keep on going,

continue toute suite s'il te plait! O je te tuais !

good so far, I wonder how this will turn out