|Reviews for love and origami|
| NatureForTheHuman chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
thats my artsy curly cue
i think you could publish a book
and you know how much i like crushing people with the truth
damn paper folding
who cares if it isnt a perfect pentagon
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Oh, what gorgeous imagery. I love the emphasis on "fly," too, both putting it in its own line and bolding it. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)
| evm chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
So pretty! I love the title. And the brevity.
| In the Rye chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
short and simple but well articulated.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
This felt simple and complicated at the same time. Though I suppose that's the same as everything else in this world, right? I liked it, though personally I could have done without the bold. And the last line seemed a bit vague, but it's ok to do that in poetry. The rest just seemed so straightforward that those last two lines were quite a contrast. Good job.