Reviews for hollyhocks & the cottonwood trees
NatureForTheHuman chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
hey liv

nice job on the poem gosh you add more shit everytime i check my email

hah ima trying to read it all

you really must get online

i hope you didnt go to the rally

yay apush tomorrow

ima excited
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Lovely. I love the extended metaphor, how well everything fits together and the meaning behind lines like "nothingnothingnothing." Really nice work. Keep writing! :)
evm chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
This is amazing! The only thing I would change would be to un-parenthese "thunder" you don't need to, it works just as good the way it is.
Alayone chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I am currently reading this during a thunderstorm and it seems so appropriate. I find the "nothingnothingnothing" a bit curious and wonder why you ran those words together. I do enjoy the Cummings-esque feel of it though.