|Reviews for All That I Can See|
| Rebirth Reborn chapter 12 . 8/7/2008
I'll review this for the overall story.
Such a sad story indeed! As I am reading, I felt like it actually happened to me which it never! I love this story. Thank you for posting it.
| deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 12 . 7/24/2008
This was straight up beautiful, even if it was horrible. I must say that this back and forth conversation outlines a part of the reason why I never wanted to fall in love. It is also a big part of why I will never do it again (though the main part is more identical to the first chapter minus the part where love actually became happiness)
Reading this made me feel... well... like I havent felt since I forced myself to not feel that way any more. I will always regret leaving. You portrayed that feeling beautifully in this (I want to call it) story. It almost made me cry (seeing as im a cold hearted fool, thats impressive).
Anyway, amazing job. I will be reading some more of your work soon.
| Rebirth Reborn chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
I loved both chapters! Please continue this fiction!