|Reviews for Stockholm Syndrome|
| R. Lauden chapter 2 . 10/10/2009
You do a great job at showing their personalities through the dialogue. I especially like the bickering through the door. That made me laugh.
I did notice that this chapter is supposed to be through Evangeline's POV. Since they are on opposite sides of the door, and she cannot see them, I would be careful with descriptors like "Sofia stamped her foot", "Tristan said with a smirk on his face", and "Tristan yelled his fists balled". You could also switch the POV mid-chapter.
This is more of an opinion, but I want to see what Tristan looks like. He sounds like a cutie. Haha.
| R. Lauden chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
You are a great writer. The formatting was a little off, but I managed.
I think that the "towering black Estate in the distance" should either be, "towering black estate in the distance" or "towering Blackwood Estate in the distance".
| Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
This looks like a really interesting story so far. I like the way that you describe things.
| Lady of Confusion chapter 4 . 8/19/2009
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 3 . 4/22/2009
hope you update soon
| all4hydration chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
bahahah! i love it!
| sw33tdaisie chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
hey this story seems like it will be interesting but i think it would be better if you updated more...sorry just thought that 3 chapters in like 9 months isn't going to get a lot of ppl hooked onto your story...anyway hope to read more soon
| tornangelwings chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
no this cant end here! keep going! keep going!