|Reviews for Trapped Nowhere|
| lahunnybee chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Your figurative writing is fantastic. I enjoyed this, a lot. I also like the title a lot.
My only critique would be that you capitalize, your "I's".
Other than that it was well written.
| Mad Asher chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Vivid imagery and nicely worded, but it would look better, I think, if you centered the text, double-spaced it or something, and capitalized the 'i's
Anyway it's just my personal opinion. I thought it was well done either way.