Reviews for 23 Flavors
Anthony Tesla chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Hahaha, OK, that was cute. Very good XD

C' ya
YellowShootingStar chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Wow, this is such a good poem. I absolutely loved it! Great poem. Great job!
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Oh! I don't need specifics. Any person who has hung with friends knows already. . . Great job. Very sweet. Interesting way to get inspiration (from a cola commercial of all places).
drafts of ka chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
:D Fantastic, Captain, fantastic. The rhythm, the imagery, and the two lines to wrap it up at the end. I just wish my summer was as good as yours has been.

-Pirate
ChapeauVert chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
I love this idea! And the way you wrote it (being vague about whom you're speaking, but still giving specific examples)is awesome :)