Reviews for Chlorine Noon
Isca chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
"Like you with your button eyes." I found that line very chilling and haunting. I loved the first line! :)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Ooh, that last line is phenomenal. The last four lines are, actually. Really fascinating images and emotions in this. Damn, can't get over the last line. Really nice sound and images. Keep writing! :)