|Reviews for The Way Things Turned Out|
| Ekuboryu chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I love the voice of the narrator in the beginning of your piece. She's very matter o fact about the fact that the world has ended, or is ending as the case may be. I think it goes on for a little too long for me though. I found myself saying 'Alright, alright, tell me what happened!' by about halfway through.
Once you go into scene the mood changes completely, and I like that. You can really sympathize with Tim and it's amusing that he is more concerned with the wrath of his wife than the end of the world. Your dialog and description is spot on as well.
Looking forward to another chapter!