|Reviews for The Crippled Man's Ammunition|
| Leaves of Labefaction chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
This is really good ... and also sad. I like both the plot and the execution, the way the story is set up and the writing style, and most of all I love the tragic ending ...
| leighie chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Oh my goodness... such a short piece, but it has captured the emotions of the man so vividly. I love how the title ties in with the story, in the end the tragedy was in the ammunition. Or lack thereof. *sigh* Accidents like these happen... he had to make it look real though. Poor man, he doesn't deserve prison, much less oblivion. It's an amazing piece, keep up the good work!
| Stopdamadness chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Wow...wow this is so good. Wow.
| S. Kelly chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Even though this story was on the short side, you managed to convey a lot of tension in your writing. I wonder what drove the poor 'robber' to do something so desperate. A very haunting piece.
| Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Such a tragic ending, and yet so puzzling. I can't possibly imagine what could make a man decide he wants to live the rest of his life in prison.
But you were very descriptive, which kept it interesting. Very interesting indeed!