Reviews for Glass
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
i like the morbid tone in the last line.
drops of rain chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Bravo for the word choices.
Frosthold chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Beautiful. I love it when poets take something so ordinary as this and make it into a great poem!

fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
o very nice last line. great descriptions throughout!
Isca chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
It's choppy, but you know what? I like it works well like that, as it shows the 'edgy, sharp' nature of glass. :)
noctema chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
i'm amazed.
stolen hugs chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
love the imagery. so simple, but yet so utterly complex...

awesome job.

gg. lass chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
i like it.

the last line makes this poem very realistic and blunt.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

hoira chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I'm a lover of color, and I like how you apply that to the title, Glass. :)
JD Kirkland. Taurus Land chapter 1 . 7/25/2008